Good Apollo Im Burning StarIV

My first truly good piece of fanart in awhile. I'm absolutely obsessed with The Amory Wars right now, and particularly this part of the story. It's from Coheed and Cambria's third album, Good Apollo I'm Burning Star IV Vol. 1: From Fear Through the Eyes of Madness...mouthful I know. Most of you have no clue what this is unfortunately but I'll at least introduce the characters. The main character that this part of the story follows is The Writing Writer (or just the Writer) and he's the main focus of the picture. The main character of the Amory Wars in general is Claudio Kilgannon and he's standing behind The Writer. Then we have The Writer's dog Apollo (now you understand part of the title). Next to The Writer is a demonic bicycle called Ten Speed, which is a illusion of The Writer's that tells him to do all sorts of evil things to alleviate his grief that comes from the breakup with his girlfriend Erica Court, who's at the top. The Writer is the one that's actually writing the story of Claudio and the rest of the Amory Wars characters, so it's like the whole thing is a fictional story, and eventually the Writer enters the world of his story and faces Claudio. It's pretty intense. I can't explain it all so look up some stuff on it. I need to buy the comic so bad D|
Now for the artistic part. I was very pleased with this for a lot of reasons. One being Claudio. I haven't really drawn anyone from that angle before and even though he's mostly blocked by the Writer, I still think it came out good. Next most is the coloring. I was so very pleased with all the shading and such that I did. I don't know.
Now all those lines around the picture are random lines from different songs off that album. If you can match which lines go to which songs I'll give you like...some cookies or something.

Lyrics (c) Coheed and Cambria and Claudio Sanchez

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(Also, I'm aware of the typos in the picture title. I couldn't fit it all otherwise >_>; )